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I like your introduction about the Montessori Education. The video is very clear and easy to understand. However, I wish there would be more details about what specific courses or any practices in your institution.
I think the video of Montessori Education is good. But I'm not sure how it is related to your theme or slogan "Happy Children" since 'Happy' is quite an abstract word. I'm not saying you have to change the slogan, just let you know, cause at my first sight, I'm a bit confused what this website is for when I see this slogan...
I believe you want to express Montessori education is a better approach to educate children as a whole person with self-learning skills, responsibility and leadership etc, not only cramming children to studying like the conservative education does. So maybe this is not just about 'happy', I mean, Montessori education can not only inspire children's interest to learn by themselves(探索求知欲等等), but also develop their other skills like responsibility and leadership etc, not just about the knowledge. Maybe you could advertise your product from this two perspective..
And you may want you give more example to convince your customers that how people educated in Montessori way distinguish from others educated in the conservative approach to show that your product is better?
I think this website is somehow attractive since it introduces a new way of education to the public and try to encourage it among teaching and leading children. Additionally, using videos to explain what is Montessori is clear and efficient and the pictures are nice and attractive.
However, there are also some issues deserved further consideration. For example, at the first glance of this website, the headline "Happy Children" might be a bit confused, because I don't know what it is, for example, the name of your company? the name of your project? the slogan? etc. Also, there might be parents who believe that Montessori education is able to bring various benefits to children's growth but detailed course plans and successful cases should be presented, which might be useful and plausible. Namely, this website needs to include how you prove the modern way of teaching is better than the conventional way of teaching and whether the staff/teachers within this context have the ability to teach as Montessori required, all in order to convince customers to purchase your products. Moreover, the goal of this course is unclear. do you wanna show what is Montessori or want the parents to buy your products. The target consumers are not very clear, even though the range of ages has been listed on the website, L1/L2 is also of importance as well as the use of the languages. Last but not least, the mobile-end version should also be considered as many people now like to use cell phone to check the website.
I like your introduction about the Montessori Education. The video is very clear and easy to understand. However, I wish there would be more details about what specific courses or any practices in your institution.
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DeleteI think the video of Montessori Education is good. But I'm not sure how it is related to your theme or slogan "Happy Children" since 'Happy' is quite an abstract word. I'm not saying you have to change the slogan, just let you know, cause at my first sight, I'm a bit confused what this website is for when I see this slogan...
ReplyDeleteI believe you want to express Montessori education is a better approach to educate children as a whole person with self-learning skills, responsibility and leadership etc, not only cramming children to studying like the conservative education does. So maybe this is not just about 'happy', I mean, Montessori education can not only inspire children's interest to learn by themselves(探索求知欲等等), but also develop their other skills like responsibility and leadership etc, not just about the knowledge. Maybe you could advertise your product from this two perspective..
And you may want you give more example to convince your customers that how people educated in Montessori way distinguish from others educated in the conservative approach to show that your product is better?
I think this website is somehow attractive since it introduces a new way of education to the public and try to encourage it among teaching and leading children. Additionally, using videos to explain what is Montessori is clear and efficient and the pictures are nice and attractive.
ReplyDeleteHowever, there are also some issues deserved further consideration. For example, at the first glance of this website, the headline "Happy Children" might be a bit confused, because I don't know what it is, for example, the name of your company? the name of your project? the slogan? etc. Also, there might be parents who believe that Montessori education is able to bring various benefits to children's growth but detailed course plans and successful cases should be presented, which might be useful and plausible. Namely, this website needs to include how you prove the modern way of teaching is better than the conventional way of teaching and whether the staff/teachers within this context have the ability to teach as Montessori required, all in order to convince customers to purchase your products. Moreover, the goal of this course is unclear. do you wanna show what is Montessori or want the parents to buy your products. The target consumers are not very clear, even though the range of ages has been listed on the website, L1/L2 is also of importance as well as the use of the languages. Last but not least, the mobile-end version should also be considered as many people now like to use cell phone to check the website.